Question

【題目】 假設(shè)你是李明，你的好友Tom即將中考，感到焦慮。根據(jù)以下中文提示給他發(fā)一封email,幫助他客服焦慮情緒。要求80詞左右，郵件的收尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

要點(diǎn)如下：1. 每個人都會有苦惱、焦慮的時候；

2. 可以向老師、家長或朋友傾訴，獲取幫助；

3. 鍛煉有助于減壓，聽音樂也能幫你放松；

4. 堅持到最后，相信困難總能克服。

5. 補(bǔ)充一至兩點(diǎn)你的看法。

參考詞匯：anxious adj. 焦慮的； pressure n. 壓力； overcome v. 克服

Dear Tom,

I hear you are stressed out because the final exam is coming________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】例文：

Dear Tom,

I hear you are stressed out because the final exam is coming,Everyone may feel worried or sad sometimes.I’d like to give you some tips to help you deal with the problem.

Be sure to tell others about your troubles.When encountering any difficulties,communicate with classmates,teachers and parents in time.You should make a schedule about your life and study,which can help you organize your time well and do everything in prefect order.As for study,you should preview the new lessons before class and review what you have learned after class.Try to relax yourself by listenng to music or doing sports whenever you can.If you keep doing these, difficulties must be overcome.

As you know,all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy,so you’d better balance the time of study and play.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

1、題干解讀：題目要求你給你的好友寫信，幫助他克服焦慮情緒，要求包含所給的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2、例文采用三段式；時態(tài)主要以一般現(xiàn)在時為主；例文詳細(xì)的介紹了幫助好友克服焦慮情緒的方法；結(jié)構(gòu)清晰；邏輯性強(qiáng)。

3、高分亮點(diǎn)：

短語：deal with；be sure to do sth；communicate with；listen to music；had better do sth。

句型：When encountering any difficulties,communicate with classmates,teachers and parents in time；If you keep doing these, difficulties must be overcome。