Question

【題目】根據(jù)下面表格內(nèi)容,寫一篇80字左右的文章,介紹一下你的同學(xué)李華。

姓名	李華
年齡	15
外貌	高而強(qiáng)壯
愛好	打籃球,籃球打的很棒
聰明	1).擅長英語,數(shù)學(xué),歷史,對世界上奇妙的事物知道得很多； 2).去野營時(shí)會搭建帳篷
樂于助人	1).經(jīng)常幫助同學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)英語； 2). …… 3). ……
勇敢	一個(gè)星期天早上,像往常一樣坐在河邊看書,突然聽到一個(gè)男孩大聲呼救,他快速地跳進(jìn)河里,把小男孩從水里救了上來……

要求：1.條理清楚,語意連貫。2.緊扣主題,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。3.書寫規(guī)范,注意使用正確的人稱、時(shí)態(tài)。

Answer 1

【答案】My friend is Li Hua. He is 15 years old. He is strong and healthy. He is good at playing basketball and play it well. He studies very hard and does well in all subjects such as English, math and history. He is curious about something in the world and learns a lot about it. He can put up his tent when he goes camping. He is helpful. He often helps others with their English. He can get along well with the classmates and he is always ready to help others in trouble. He is popular among the students.

One Sunday morning, he was reading near the river when he heard a boy crying for help. He quickly jumped into the river and saved him from the river. We are proud of his bravery.

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,介紹我的同學(xué)李華。結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí),人稱為單數(shù)第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用,比如：My friend is……, He is……, He can……, he was reading……, We are……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系.