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19．自從2014央視春節(jié)聯(lián)歡晚會播出后，小品《扶不扶》引起了國人的深深反思．幫還是不幫，成為了一個艱難的選擇．但我們知道，助人為樂，一直是我國中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德．雖然有時幫助他人會讓你很糾結(jié)，可是我們內(nèi)心對真善美的渴望不能變，我們樂于助人的優(yōu)良品德也需要堅持并發(fā)揚光大．作為中學生，當他人有需要時，你一定愿意義無反顧地去幫助吧？請以"Helping others is great"為題，談談你的想法與做法．

Topic	Helping others is great
Why helping others is great？	1 每個人都會有困難，幫助他人等于幫助自己 2 更容易交到朋友 3 …
What do you usually do to help others？	1．… 2 … …

注意：1短文必須包括三部分內(nèi)容，需要陳述話題、意義（3條）和做法（至少2條）
2表中右欄信息僅供參考，也可自由發(fā)揮；詞數(shù)80個左右
Helping others is great!
Helping others is considered as one of the traditional Chinese virtues（美德）．Sometimes，it's kind of hard for us to make a decision whether to help or not，but we are supposed to help others．
Becausehelping others is helping ourselves．
I enjoy giving my hand to others for thefollowing reasons．Firstly，when you are in trouble，you need others'help aswell．So if you are always helpful to others，they will be willing to help you，too．Secondly，it's easier to make friends with those who are given help fromyou．Besides，helping others can make you feel happy and take pride in yourself．It's really a good feeling．
Helping others is great．Therefore，I usually try my best to help others．At school，I often help my classmates withtheir English．At home，I do some chores as often as possible to make my motherrelaxed．
It's the truth that helping others is helping ourselves．Helping others is great!Try it and you will feel better．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
when you are in trouble，you need others'help as well當你有麻煩，你也需要他人的幫助．
when引導的時間狀語從句
【高分句型二】
So if you are always helpful to others，they will be willing to help you，too．所以如果你總是樂于助人，他們也會樂意幫助你，
if引導的條件狀語從句．

解答 Helping others is great!
   Helping others is considered as one of the traditional Chinese virtues（美德）．Sometimes，it's kind of hard for us to make a decision whether to help or not，but we aresupposed to help others．Because helping others is helping ourselves．
   I enjoy giving my hand to others for thefollowing reasons．Firstly，when you are in trouble，you need others'help as well【高分句型一】．So if you are always helpful to others，they will be willing to help you，too．【高分句型二】Secondly，it's easier to make friends with those who are given help fromyou．Besides，helping others can make you feel happy and take pride in  yourself．It's really a good feeling．（幫助他人是好的）
   Helping others is great．Therefore，I usually try my best to help others．At school，I often help my classmates withtheir English．At home，I do some chores as often as possible to make my motherrelaxed．（我通常怎樣做）
  It's the truth that helping others is helping ourselves．Helping others is great!Try it and you will feel better．

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