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【題目】書面表達，根據(jù)中、英文提示內(nèi)容，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于50詞的短文。

假設(shè)你叫李紅，下周六是你的生日，你準(zhǔn)備在家開個生日晚會（7:30開始），想邀請同學(xué)和朋友參加。你家住在青年路(Qingnian Road )70號，乘1路或108路公共汽車在人民路(Renmin Road)下車(get off)，家就在車站對面。房子是紅色的，門是白色的。請根據(jù)以上信息，給好友王琳寫封信，信中應(yīng)包括以下幾點：

1．邀請她參加晚會； 2．晚會的時間，地點;

3．你的住址； 4．如何到達；

5．你很希望她來。

要求：60詞左右。

Dear Wang Lin，

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Wang lin

Next Saturday is my birthday. I'm going to hold a birthday party at home in the evening. It will start at 7: 30. Would you like to come? I' ve also asked some other classmates of ours and some of my friends.

I live at 70Qingnian Road. You can take bus No. 1 or No. 108,and get off at the stop of Renmin Road. My house is just on the other side of the road. It's a red house with a white door. You can't miss it. I do hope you will come.

Yours

Li Hong

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點一定齊全。句子要完整，表達準(zhǔn)確，注意時態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來加強文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達準(zhǔn)確流利，要點齊全。文中有一些好的表達方式如I' ve also asked some other classmates of ours and some of my friends.I live at 70Qingnian Road. You can take bus No. 1 or No. 108,and get off at the stop of Renmin Road.等等。