Question

【題目】請仔細觀察下面的圖片，并根據(jù)所給提示和要求寫一篇短文。

提示：（1）What are the man and the woman doing?

（2）What should you do when you see people litter like this? Why?

要求：（1）短文須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮。

（2）短文中不要出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名和人名。

（3）詞數(shù)80個左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。

參考詞匯：throw, environment, civilized(文明的

I can see a man and a woman in the picture. The man is_______________

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Answer 1

【答案】I can see a man and a woman in the picture. The man is throwing his rubbish in the public place.The other woman is stopping him and telling him to put it into the dustbin.The city is our home. We should protect it. Therefore, when we see someone litter like this, we should act like the woman.The environment should be protected by everybody.We should be civilized citizens.

【解析】亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如in the picture，in the public place，the other woman，put it into the dustbin，like this。而I can see a man and a woman in the picture./ We should protect it./ We should be civilized citizens.等多種情態(tài)動詞句式it is important for everyone to protect them.的運用，豐富了習作內(nèi)容，使表達多樣，是本文的最大亮點。