Question

【題目】假設(shè)你將代表你們班參加學(xué)校舉辦的有關(guān)“校園安全”的征文比賽。請你以“How to Make Our School Safer”為題寫一篇英語征文，闡明同學(xué)們的觀點(diǎn)，再寫一兩點(diǎn)你對校園安全的建議。80詞左右。要點(diǎn)如下：

Classmates' opinions
1.Safety classes: teach safety in an easy way; learn to stay away from danger.
2.Sports safety: do warmup(熱身) activities; drink water after playing sports.
3.Classroom safety: never do anything dangerous.
Your opinions	…

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Answer 1

【答案】How to Make Our School Safer

How to make our school safer? There are many activities that we can do. In safety classes, teachers can teach safety in an easy way and students should learn carefully to stay away from danger, such as fire and earthquakes.

When we have P．E. classes, we should always do warmup activities before playing sports and drink some water after playing sports. And we aren't supposed to do anything dangerous to get ourselves or others into trouble.

I think schools should provide us with more emergency practice. Maybe someday we can use the skills that we learn to save our lives.

【解析】

這是一篇給材料作文。要求你以“How to Make Our School Safer”為題寫一篇英語征文，代表你們班參加學(xué)校舉辦的有關(guān)“校園安全”的征文比賽，闡明同學(xué)們的觀點(diǎn)，再寫一兩點(diǎn)你對校園安全的建議。首先要認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心；注意文章的文體、人稱和時態(tài)。本文時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要用第一人稱。在寫作時注意連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等，還要檢查字?jǐn)?shù)是否符合要求，確保正確無誤。