Question

書面表達(dá)
在一次班會課上，你班同學(xué)就養(yǎng)寵物的利弊進(jìn)行了討論，請你根據(jù)下表提供的信息，以班長的身份用英語做一個(gè)總結(jié)。
優(yōu)點(diǎn)：
1、現(xiàn)在越來越多的人擁有寵物，動物已成為我們的好朋友。
2、寵物為人們帶來許多樂趣。
3、養(yǎng)寵物可以幫助培養(yǎng)我們的愛心。
缺點(diǎn)：
1、養(yǎng)寵物需要花大量的時(shí)間和金錢。
2、你需要照顧它（請至少舉一個(gè)例子）。
3、寵物會弄臟房間，還會傳染疾病。
你的看法：--------------
注意：
1、詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不記入總詞數(shù)；
2、參考詞匯：傳染疾病—spread diseases；
3、短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，不要逐條翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順。
Just now we talked about the advantages and disadvantages of keeping pets. Some students think                                                                         ___________________________________________________________________            _
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Answer 1

Just now we talked about the advantages and disadvantages of keeping pets. Some students think that more and more people keep pets nowadays. Animals have become our good friends. Keeping pets can help us care about others. But some students don’t think it is good to keep pets. You need to spend a lot of time taking care of them like feeding them and cleaning them. When they get sick, you need to send them to hospital, and that will cost you a lot of money. Pets will often make your room dirty and smelly. Sometimes they may spread diseases.     Therefore, I think we should keep pets that are cheaper and easier to keep like goldfish.

試題分析:
這是一篇給材料作文。給出的材料比較詳細(xì)，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。寫作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。
點(diǎn)評：注意寫作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是單數(shù)第三人稱較多。寫作中語言要準(zhǔn)確、簡明，說明有條理，符合邏輯。