Question

書面表達(dá)
假定你是張強(qiáng)，是一名初二學(xué)生。上星期天你從報(bào)紙上看到保護(hù)野生動物俱樂部(Friend of Nature)的招聘廣告。請你寫封簡短的應(yīng)聘信，介紹自己的情況(見下表)，表示愿意為俱樂部做一些工作，并請俱樂部負(fù)責(zé)人考慮并盡早予以答復(fù)。在作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名。

姓名	張強(qiáng)	年齡	15
身體狀況	健康	性格	樂觀的；誠實(shí)；有幽默感
愛好	英語、旅游、打籃球
相關(guān)經(jīng)歷	去年就保護(hù)野生動物給報(bào)社和雜志寫信
理由	……(自擬2條加入俱樂部的理由)
聯(lián)系方式	010—8255668；zhangqiang@163.com

注意：1. 信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
2. 詞數(shù)70-80。
Dear sir,
I read your ad in the newspaper last Sunday. Now I'm writing to tell you I'd like to become a member of Friend of Nature.
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Yours sincerely
Zhang Qiang

Answer 1

Dear sir,
I read your ad in the newspaper last Sunday. Now I'm writing to tell you I'd like to become a member of Friend of Nature.
I am a student from Grade 8. I’m in good health. I am very helpful and ready to help people any time. You can believe what I say. I have a good sense of humour. Anyone never feel bored or unhappy when he is with me. My favourite lesson is English. I’m also interested in travelling and playing basketball. I often practise with my friends on Wednesday afternoon after school. Last year I wrote to newspapers and magazines about how to protect wild animals.
I would like to become a member of Friend of Nature because I enjoy the beauty of nature and like wildlife a lot. I am interested in reading about wildlife and I quite understand the important of protecting wildlife. I want to do something to help wildlife and protect the nature.
I will be very happy if I can become a member of your club. You can call me on 010—8255668 or e-mail me at zhangqiang@163.com.
Yours sincerely
Zhang Qiang

解析試題分析：本文的寫作首先對自己個(gè)人的情況進(jìn)行介紹，包括年齡，職業(yè)，健康狀況，性格等。對自己最喜歡的科目也要進(jìn)行介紹，并且說明自己非常喜歡旅游熱愛親近自然，自己也有相關(guān)的工作經(jīng)歷，如wrote to newspapers and magazines about how to protect wild animals，第二段對想加入俱樂部的理由進(jìn)行描寫，可以從自己喜歡野生動物，理解保護(hù)他們的重要性方面進(jìn)行闡述，最后表達(dá)自己非常期待加入俱樂部，期待回信。
考點(diǎn)：提綱類寫作
點(diǎn)評：在對于諸如此類文章的寫作，學(xué)生在平時(shí)的練習(xí)、學(xué)習(xí)生活中要善于積累常用的表達(dá)。按照提綱的提示，有條理的將各個(gè)信息表達(dá)出來，英寫作過程中切忌使用重復(fù)的表達(dá)，對于不會表達(dá)的意思要學(xué)會替換，同時(shí)注意用平時(shí)在課本中或是閱讀中積累的單詞句型來自如的表達(dá)自己的意思，這樣文章才能寫出新意，寫出文采。