Question

【題目】假如《英語測試報(bào)》正舉辦題為“A time when I made someone happy”的征文大賽。請你根據(jù)以下提示問題寫一篇短文，參與此次征文大賽。

要點(diǎn)提示：

1. Who was the person you made happy?

2. When was it?

3. What did you say or do?

4. Why did it make him/her happy?

5. How did you feel at that moment?

要求：

1. 征文內(nèi)容包含全部要點(diǎn)提示，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2. 詞數(shù)80左右，標(biāo)題已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名或地名。

A time when I made someone happy

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Answer 1

【答案】A time when I made someone happy

My teachers always tell me to help people in need. Last weekend, I did one thing that made an old man very happy.

Last Sunday I took a walk in Renmin Park. While I was walking, I saw an old cleaner collecting rubbish. I found he had great difficulty collecting some small things on the ground. I decided to give him a hand.

I helped him to collect lots of rubbish. Seeing the big smile on his face, I knew I’d done something right. It made me truly happy!

【解析】

這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如tell sb. to do sth.，in need，It's time to do，take a walk，in Renmin Park，collect rubbish，on the ground，decide to do，give sb. a hand，lots of等。而While I was walking, I saw an old cleaner collecting rubbish./ Last weekend, I did one thing that made an old man very happy./ Seeing the big smile on his face, I knew I’d done something right.等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。