Question

【題目】書面表達（共15分）

根據(jù)要求完成大作文，并將答案寫在答題卡(紙)的相應(yīng)位置。（共15分）

假如你是某校英語報專欄的編輯李華，你收到Lucy的來信，她感覺學習壓力很大（如作業(yè)多, 成績不理想等），并且學習英語方面有困難，你能安慰她，給她一些減輕壓力和學好英語的適當?shù)慕ㄗh嗎？

●減輕( reduce )壓力的建議（至少2條）

●學好英語的方法? （至少2條）

要求：注意文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名；書寫工整、規(guī)范。詞數(shù)70詞左右

Dear Lucy,

I’m sorry to hear that you are under too much pressure.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Lucy,

I’m sorry to hear that you are under too much pressure.

There are many ways that can help us solve this problem, but the following may be the most effective. First, we shouldn't get up late and we can do proper morning exercise to build up our body. Second, staying up late is not a good habit, enough sleep is necessary, or we 'll be sleepy in next day school work . Third, if we have some problems in life or study, we should learn to share them with our teachers or parents, and ask them for help. Talking about them with friends is another way to relax ourselves. In a word, we should face the problem and try our best to overcome it. Only this can we live a happier life.

I know you aren’t good at English. But you needn’t worry. I can help you with it. We can practice it together and we can learn new words by flashcard. I think you can do better.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文給出了一些要點，并給出了作文的開頭和結(jié)尾。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點表達出來，并適當發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點：這篇短文多次使用序數(shù)詞，使文章表達非常清晰條理。學習中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。