Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你叫李軍，你家于2017年被列為“精準(zhǔn)扶貧”的幫扶對(duì)象。在政府兩年時(shí)間的幫扶下，你家變化巨大。時(shí)值學(xué)校校報(bào)舉辦“家的變化”主題征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇70詞左右的短文，參加本次活動(dòng)。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：

過(guò)去	1. 家庭貧困，房屋破舊。 2. 母親生病，為母擔(dān)憂，成績(jī)下滑。
現(xiàn)在	3. 住進(jìn)新房，母親康復(fù)，學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)步。 4. 生活日趨改善。

要求: 1. 詞數(shù)：70詞左右。短文開頭語(yǔ)已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2. 短文中必須包括所有要點(diǎn)，但不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

3. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名。

My name is Li Jun. Thanks to the government, my family has changed a lot in the last two years. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】My name is Li Jun. Thanks to the government, my family has changed a lot in the last two years. My family used to be very poor and we lived in an old and broken house. What’s more, my mother wasn’t in good health and she often fell ill. I was worried about her all the time, so my grades dropped. However, with the help of the government, we have moved into a new house. To our joy, my mother has become better. As for me, I have made great progress at school because of my hard work. All in all, our life has gradually improved.

【解析】

本題要求把過(guò)去的家鄉(xiāng)和現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行比較，得出現(xiàn)在變得更好的結(jié)論。描述過(guò)去的狀況，要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)；描述現(xiàn)在的變化，要用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)態(tài)。介紹自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化，用第一人稱。

短文第一句“My family used to be very poor and we lived in an old and broken house.”運(yùn)用固定搭配“used to do”描述過(guò)去的家鄉(xiāng)條件不好。下一句用短語(yǔ)“what’s more”（而且）表示語(yǔ)氣遞進(jìn)；短語(yǔ)“fall ill”（生病），介紹過(guò)去健康狀況不好。當(dāng)比較現(xiàn)在時(shí)，用副詞“however”（然而）。短語(yǔ)“to our joy”（令我高興的是）和“as for me”（對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)），作者結(jié)合親身感受，介紹了身邊的變化。最后用“all in all”（總而言之）進(jìn)行總結(jié)，得出結(jié)論，即家鄉(xiāng)的變化很大。