Question

9．根據(jù)要求完成大作文，詞數(shù)：80～100詞．
如果每天多出一小時(shí)空閑時(shí)間，你會做什么呢？讀書、聽音樂、做運(yùn)動、上網(wǎng)？…不同的同學(xué)會有自己不同的打算．請根據(jù)你對朋友打的了解，設(shè)想他們會有怎樣的安排．寫出3個(gè)好朋友的活動，再談?wù)勀阕约旱脑O(shè)想及理由．
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What  do you want to do if you have one more hour to relax yourself？Different  students  may  have different  ideas．I think  my good friends  will make  good use of their free time．Lily likes reading．I think she will spend time reading more books so that she can know more about the world．Linda loves music and movies．She may spend her time listening to music，singing songs and going to the movies．Lucy likes doing sports．She may go out to play volleyball or go swimming with her friends．（三個(gè)好朋友的安排）
As for me，I am busy studying every day，so I want to relax．I want to watch TV and surf the Internet．I also want to help my parents do some homework．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①What  do you want to do if you have one more hour to relax yourself，如果每天多出一小時(shí)空閑時(shí)間，你想做什么？句子中want to do sth想做某事，if引導(dǎo)一個(gè)條件狀語從句．
②I also want to help my parents do some homework．我也想幫助我的父母做一些家庭作業(yè)．句子中want to do sth想做某事，help sb do sth幫助某人做某事，do some homework做家務(wù)．

解答 What  do you want to do if you have one more hour to relax yourself（高分句型）？Different  students  may  have different  ideas．I think  my good friends  will make  good use of their free time．（引出話題）
Lily likes reading．I think she will spend time reading more books so that she can know more about the world．Linda loves music and movies．She may spend her time listening to music，singing songs and going to the movies．Lucy likes doing sports．She may go out to play volleyball or go swimming with her friends．（三個(gè)好朋友的安排）
As for me，I am busy studying every day，so I want to relax．I want to watch TV and surf the Internet．I also want to help my parents do some homework（高分句型）．（自己的設(shè)想及理由）

點(diǎn)評 以提綱提供情景的作文，要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個(gè)提綱的要點(diǎn)．行文間要注意簡化描述，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句．在作文完成的時(shí)候，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達(dá)清楚的要點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)．寫作時(shí)，要注意謂語動詞形式的變化．另外，還需要使用一些句型和短語，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢．