Question

【題目】你班Carl同學(xué)最近遇到了一些問題，希望得到一些建議和幫助。請你以Mr. Friend的身份給Car寫封信，針對Carl的所有問題提出一些有益的建議。

Carl的問題	將來想當(dāng)一名記者，但很安靜，不喜歡與人交談
	喜歡穿紅色衣服，但同學(xué)嘲笑他像個女生
	喜歡籃球，并且經(jīng)常打，作業(yè)花的時間較少，不知如何平衡自己 的學(xué)業(yè)和愛好
你的建議	……(至少四條)

要求：1. 不能出現(xiàn)真實的個人身份信息；

2. 不得遺漏提示信息，條理清楚，字跡工整，語意連貫可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3. 詞數(shù)：110詞左右(信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù))。

Dear Carl,

Thank you very much for telling me about your problems. I hope I can help you. _______________________

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I hope you think my advice is valuable to you.

Best wishes,

Mr. Friend

Answer 1

【答案】【參考范文】

Dear Carl,

Thank you very much for telling me about your problems. I hope I can help you. You want to be a reporter in the future, but you are too quiet and you don’t enjoy talking with others. You like wearing red clothes but your classmates think you are like a girl and often laugh at you. You are a student, so you are busy every day. You must have lots of homework, but you are crazy about basketball. You spend a lot of time playing basketball. Like this, you will find you are tired. You should give it up. You don’t stay up late. If you make low marks in exams, you will feel stressed. You should talk about this to your parents or your best friends. They can help you. Please work hard to get good marks. I believe you will go to high school. I hope you think my advice is valuable to you.

Best wishes.

Mr. Friend

【解析】【亮點說明】

本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊、語言簡練、層次清晰、內(nèi)容飽滿。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如thank for doing，want to do，be a reporter, in the future，enjoy doing ,talk with，like doing，laugh at，lots of，spend some time doing sth.，a lot of，play basketball，give up，stay up late，talk about, work hard, go to high school等。而You want to be a reporter in the future, but you are too quiet and you don’t enjoy talking with others./ You are a student, so you are busy every day./ If you make low marks in exams, you will feel stressed./ I believe you will go to high school.等多種復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，表達(dá)流暢，是本文的最大亮點。