Question

請(qǐng)你以學(xué)校學(xué)生會(huì)的名義，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一份有關(guān)即將在本校舉辦2014年英語(yǔ)夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)的書(shū)面通知。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格中的內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)一份完整的通知。

時(shí)間	6月29日至7月1日
地點(diǎn)	學(xué)校禮堂
內(nèi)容	演講，辯論（have a debate） 請(qǐng)英語(yǔ)特長(zhǎng)生談學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的經(jīng)驗(yàn) 師生英語(yǔ)晚會(huì) 有個(gè)游覽南京城的機(jī)會(huì)
要求	歡迎廣大同學(xué)踴躍參加夏令營(yíng)（the English Summer Camp）活動(dòng) 不要忘記活動(dòng)后寫(xiě)一篇日記，談?wù)勀愕母邢?br />

(英語(yǔ)夏令營(yíng):The English Summer Camp)
要求：
1. 須包括所給的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫。
2.詞數(shù)80字左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
NOTICE
June 6，2014
Dear students ,
                                                                            
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Student’s Union

Answer 1

The English Summer Camp will be held in the school hall from June 29 to July 1 . Many interesting activities are waiting for you to join in .
During the camp , you can make a speech and have a debate . Besides , the students who do well in English study will talk about their experience . There is also an English party between teachers and students . In the end ,you’ll have a chance to visit the City of Nanjing .
Everyone is welcome to take an active part in it . Don’t forget to tell us what you think of the camp in your diary .

試題分析：這是一篇材料作文。內(nèi)容很明確，就是以學(xué)校學(xué)生會(huì)的名義，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一份有關(guān)即將在本校舉辦2014年英語(yǔ)夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)的書(shū)面通知，并且給出了相關(guān)的信息。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)文章的結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰，不要漏掉信息點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意句子的完整性，主謂一致。可以適當(dāng)使用一些連詞，使文章更緊湊，邏輯更清晰。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰而完整。文中使用了一些短語(yǔ)如wait for，do well in，talk about，in the end，have a chance，take an active part in，from···to，between···and等等，意思表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確完整。