Question

最近，你們班召開了以“我的中國夢”為主題的班會活動。請寫一篇文章，敘述自己對“中國夢”的理解和感受。詞數(shù)80詞左右。文章開頭已給出的，不計入總詞數(shù)。
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
1.作為一名學(xué)生，心中應(yīng)懷揣著中國夢的理想。
2.為祖國的日益強(qiáng)大而感到自豪（be proud of）。
3.談?wù)勛约旱膲粝氩�寫出�?shí)現(xiàn)夢想的一些具體做法。如認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)，強(qiáng)身健體，遵守規(guī)則制度，積極參加(take part in)各類有益的活動等。
4.相信夢想一定會實(shí)現(xiàn)。
Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Inspired by President Xi’s Chinese Dream, everyone talked about his understanding of the Chinese Dream.           
                                                                               
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                        

Answer 1

As middle school students, we should have a Chinese Dream. Our country is becoming stronger and stronger, we are all proud of it. And we all believe this dream will come true in the future. I want to be a doctor when I grow up because doctors not only can save people’s lives but also help people to live a better life with their professional knowledge. To realize my dream, I must try to study/work hard from now on. I should often do sports to keep healthy. I should obey the school rules and take part in all kinds of meaningful activities.I hope my dream will come true, too.

解析試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，注意時態(tài)語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文
點(diǎn)評:該題型主要考查學(xué)生的語言表達(dá)能力，在寫作中根據(jù)所給提示和語言信息，不遺漏要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。做到表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫