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8．寒假就要到了．很多學生打算在假期打工鍛煉自己，可是有些家長不同意．他們認為打工既耽誤學習，又不太安全．請你以"Should teenagers be allowed to have part-time jobs？"
為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?br />Should teenagers be allowed to have part-time jobs？
Winter holiday is coming．Many students plan to have part-time jobs．But someparents disagree．They think it wastes the students'time and it isn't safe as well．
（高分句型一） In my opinion，teenagers should be allowed to do some part-time jobs．Firstly，they can experience different lives and get more knowledge outside school．（高分句型二）Meanwhile，after learning about the difficultyof making a living，they will cherish what they have now．What's more，teenagers should have chances to make decisions by themselves．
Of course，safety is the most important．Teenagers should learn to protect themselves when doing part-time jobs．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：In my opinion，teenagers should be allowed to do some part-time jobs．依我看，青少年應(yīng)該被允許做兼職．
be allowed to do sth．被允許做某事．
高分句型二：Meanwhile，after learning about the difficultyof making a living，they will cherish what they have now．與此同時，學習了關(guān)于謀生的艱難之后，他們將會珍惜他們現(xiàn)在所擁有的生活．
after…在…之后，引導的時間狀語，主將從現(xiàn)．

解答 Should teenagers be allowedto have part-time jobs？
     Winter holiday is coming．Many students plan to have part-time jobs．But someparents disagree．They think it wastes the students'time and it isn't safe as well．（先提出一些人的看法）
  In my opinion，teenagers should be allowed to do some part-time jobs．（高分句型一）（提出自己的觀點青少年應(yīng)該被允許做兼職）Firstly，they can experience different lives and get more knowledge outside school．Meanwhile，after learning about the difficulty of making a living，they will cherish what they have now．（高分句型二）What's more，teenagers should have chances to make decisions by themselves．（后面幾個句子支撐作者的觀點）     Of course，safety is the most important．Teenagers should learn to protect themselves when doing part-time jobs．（總結(jié)，強調(diào)安全最重要，青少年做兼職的時候要學會保護自己）

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