Question

19．你們班將以夢(mèng)想為主題舉辦一次演講會(huì)，請(qǐng)你以我的夢(mèng)想為題寫一篇演講稿，演講應(yīng)包含以下幾個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容，并可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，字?jǐn)?shù)80-120詞．
1．What's your dream？
2．How will you achieve your dream？
3．When your dream comes true，what will you do？
My dream is to be a doctor when I grow up．I want to help those sick people．
I know，to achieve my dream，I need study hard now．I hope I can go to a famous university to study medicine after I graduate from the high school．I'll study and do research on different diseases that bring great pains to the patients．After that，if I have a chance，I plan to open a hospital of my own．Then I can help as many as the poor people who have little money to see doctors．I wish everyone in the world can keep healthy and to alive longer．
I believe that I can realize my dream one day if only I insist on working hard and never give up．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)勛约旱膲?mèng)想．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1夢(mèng)想是什么？
2．怎么實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想？
3當(dāng)你的夢(mèng)想成真，你會(huì)做些什么？
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
grow up 長(zhǎng)大
study hard 努力學(xué)習(xí)
keep healthy 保持健康
insist on 堅(jiān)持
give up 放棄
【高分句型】
1．I know，to achieve my dream，I need study hard now．
to achieve my dream動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)．
2．I believe①that I can realize my dream one day ②if only I ③insist on working hard and never④give up．
①that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，作為believe的賓語(yǔ)．
②if only只要
③insist on 堅(jiān)持
④give up 放棄

解答 My dream is to be a doctor when I grow up．I want to help those sick people．（夢(mèng)想是什么）
I know，to achieve my dream，I need study hard now．【高分句型】I hope I can go to a famous university to study medicine after I graduate from the high school．I'll study and do research on different diseases that bring great pains to the patients．（怎么實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想）After that，if I have a chance，I plan to open a hospital of my own．Then I can help as many as the poor people who have little money to see doctors．I wish everyone in the world can keep healthy and to alive longer．（當(dāng)你的夢(mèng)想成真，你會(huì)做些什么）
I believe that I can realize my dream one day if only I insist on working hard and never give up．【高分句型】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心．注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)．本文介紹自己的夢(mèng)想，同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等．