Question

【題目】Writing (作文):

Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic "How to Celebrate Graduation."（以“如何慶祝畢業(yè)”為題寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）

Situation:臨近畢業(yè),班里的同學們打算舉行一次畢業(yè)慶祝活動，他們在討論征集慶�；顒拥慕ㄗh。以"How to Celebrate Graduation"為題寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀愕慕ㄗh并陳述理由。

（注意，短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名,校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）

Answer 1

【答案】

How to Celebrate Graduation

How time flies! We are going to graduate from middle school. To celebrate this unforgettable moment, as one of the graduates, I would like to offer some advice on how to celebrate graduation.

First, we can change our classroom into the festive hall, and invite our parents and teachers to enjoy our elaborate performances. Second, all of us can go to DIY Cookhouse to make a big meal for our parents and teachers to express appreciation. Last, we can revisit every place of school together, and take some photos with friends. Furthermore, we can sing the old songs that we ever shared together.

The above four points are my opinions. I hope they can be accepted.

【解析】

試題分析：該題目要求學生以"How to Celebrate Graduation"為題寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀銓εe行畢業(yè)慶祝活動的建議并陳述理由。根據(jù)題目要求可知該文主要以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，用第一人稱書寫。寫作中要適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點：這篇短文使用First、Second, Last以及Furthermore等詞，使得文章非常條理，為文章增色不少。學習中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。