Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

假如你是Li Ming，你的朋友Billy 要來(lái)寧波。Billy希望他在寧波期間，你能抽出一天時(shí)間陪他玩，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提供的信息，給他寫(xiě)一封回信，告訴他那天的安排。要求：70詞左右(郵件開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；時(shí)態(tài)準(zhǔn)確；語(yǔ)句通順。

8:10 a.m. 乘14路公共汽車去兒童公園（Children’s Park)

10:30 a.m. 參觀保國(guó)寺（Baoguo Temple),因?yàn)檫@里很著名，有著悠久的歷史。

11:50a.m. 吃午飯

1:00 p.m.去江北萬(wàn)達(dá)廣場(chǎng)購(gòu)物（Jiangbei Wanda Square),廣場(chǎng)很新也很漂亮。

5:00 p.m. 去Li Ming 家做客。

Dear Billy,

Welcome to Ningbo.I am very glad that we can play together for a day.

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Yours truly,

Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Billy,

Welcome to Ningbo.I am very glad that we can play together for a day.

Let’s take No. 14 bus to Children’s Park at 8:10 a.m.At 10:30,we will go to visit Baoguo Temple because it is very famous and it has a long history.At 11:50a.m we’ll have lunch together.After lunch,we’ll have a rest.At 1:00p.m we’ll go to Jiangbei Wanda Square.It is new and beautiful.At 5:00p.m,we’ll go back to my home.

Yours truly,

Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文叫小作者給Bill寫(xiě)封回信，告訴他他們一天的活動(dòng)安排。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點(diǎn)一定齊全。句子要完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來(lái)加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，要點(diǎn)齊全。文中有一些好的表達(dá)方式如At 10:30,we will go to visit Baoguo Temple because it is very famous and it has a long history.等等。