Question

13．初中三年的學習和生活即將結(jié)束．在此期間，相信你肯定幫助過別人，也同樣接受過別人的幫助．請以Thank You，My_____為題，寫一篇不少于60詞，意義連貫，邏輯清晰，積極向上的記敘文．
要求：請將題目補充完整，描述對方的形象，記述她/他是如何幫助你的，你將如何表示謝意．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I still remember the day①when I had a low mark in English，I hid away from all my classmates②because I was shy and③afraid to be laughed at．我仍然記得那天我英語成績低，我將自己藏起來沒因為我害羞害怕被嘲笑．
①when作為關(guān)系詞的定語從句，修飾前面的the day．
②because引導的原因狀語從句．
③be afraid to do sth 害怕做某事．
【高分句型二】
She's a teacher like spring who encourages and leads us to a bright future．她是一名老師，像春天一樣，鼓勵我?guī)ьI(lǐng)我走向美好的未來．
who作為關(guān)系詞的定語從句，修飾前面的teacher．

解答 Thank You，My Teacher
I really want to express thanks to my English teacher，Miss Wang!
She's so smart and fair and friendly．She's got big eyes and long dark hair．（形象）I enjoy her each lesson every day．
With her kindness，she gets my attention．Every day she's planting a seed，helping all of us．I still remember the day  when I had a low mark in English，I hid away from all my classmates because I was shy and afraid to be laughed at．【高分句型一】Miss Wang noticed that and spent her whole afternoon helping with my test questions and my worries．（如何幫助我的）
She's a teacher like spring who encourages and leads us to a bright future【高分句型二】．I'll write a poem for her to show all my thanks．I'll let everyone know she's great and I'm grateful to have her as my teacher．（如何表示謝意）

點評 牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理．