Question

【題目】書面表達

在我們的成長道路上，不論是與朋友還是父母、老師之間都會有一些美好回憶。這些回憶包含了多少美好的故事！請以“A story between ______ and Me”為題，寫一篇英語短文。

提示：1.補充題目；

2.表達你的感受。

要求：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱；

2.詞數(shù)80左右。

A Story between ______ and Me

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Answer 1

【答案】A Story between Mark and Me

I still remember what happened between my best friend Mark and me.

When I was in Grade Eight, I just got a pen as my birthday gift from my father. I liked it very much. I showed it to my best friend, Marl. He asked me to lend it to him. Although I wasn’t willing to do so, I still lent it to him because he was my best friend. But the next day, he told me that the pen was broken when he did homework with it. I got very angry at that time. I didn’t talk to him the whole day.

Finally, I chose to forgive him. Because I thought nothing was more important than friendship. What’s more, I became very happy after I forgave him.

【解析】

本文是一篇話題作文，要求以“A story between ______ and Me”為題，寫一篇英語短文，回憶自己在成長道路上，不論是與朋友還是父母、老師之間的一些美好回憶。首先要補充完整題目，確定主題，然后圍繞主題展開寫作。在寫作時，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。