Question

4．健康對(duì)我們每個(gè)人來(lái)說(shuō)都很重要，如何才能使我們保持健康，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中的要點(diǎn)，以Let's Do Exercise Together為題寫一篇短文．

運(yùn)動(dòng)的重要性	運(yùn)動(dòng)時(shí)間與方式
•保持健康 •培養(yǎng)性格 …	•上學(xué)時(shí)步行或騎自行車 •體育課做各種鍛煉（跑步、打籃球…） •周末與朋友一起爬山、游泳等 …

參考詞匯：character性格，whenever無(wú)論什么時(shí)候
寫作要求：1．短文必須包含要點(diǎn)提示中的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2．語(yǔ)言流暢、通順，意思完整； 3.70詞左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Let's Do Exercise Together
It's very important for us to do exercise．                                

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
It's very important for us to do exercise對(duì)于我們來(lái)說(shuō)做運(yùn)動(dòng)是總要的．
It's …for …to do…對(duì)于某人來(lái)說(shuō)做某事怎么樣
【高分句型二】
Doing exercise can not only help us keep fit，but also help to train a person's character做運(yùn)動(dòng)不僅僅能幫助我們爆出健康，也能幫助培養(yǎng)性格．
not only…but also不但…而且

解答 Let's Do Exercise Together
It's very important for us to do exercise．【高分句型一】Doing exercise can not only help us keep fit，but also help to train a person's character．【高分句型二】What's more，doing exercise helps us to study better．（重要性）
We can do exercise whenever we want．It is good for us to go to school on foot or by bike．In PE classes，we can do all kinds of exercise，such as running，jumping，playing basketball and so on．On weekends，we can climb mountains or go swimming with our friends．Also，we can go hiking during the vacations．（運(yùn)動(dòng)時(shí)間與方式）
Let's do exercise and have a healthy lifestyle together

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在及將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，注意主謂一致及時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)與時(shí)態(tài)的一致問(wèn)題．語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．