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6．如果父母不在家你能照顧好自己?jiǎn)崮銓⒃鯓佣冗^(guò)這一天請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示寫(xiě)一篇不少于80詞的短文．
提示：1．家務(wù)勞動(dòng)做飯、洗衣、打掃房間等
2．合理安排學(xué)習(xí)和休息時(shí)間做家庭作業(yè)、看電視、運(yùn)動(dòng)等
3．這樣的一天將會(huì)充實(shí)而快樂(lè)我們應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)照顧自己沒(méi)有人喜歡小皇帝．
要求：1．文中請(qǐng)勿使用真實(shí)姓名、校名及地名
2．書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、語(yǔ)句通順、語(yǔ)法正確．
When my parents aren't at home，I can look after myself．I get up at 6：00．ThenI wash my face and brush my teeth．I have my breakfast at about 6：30．I have noodles for breakfast．After breakfast I clean my room．Then I dohomework afrom 7：50 to11：00，I watch Tv for about one hour．I have lunch at 12：00．After lunch，I sleep for one hour．About 2：00，I do homework again．At 4：00，I go to play football with my friends． Playing football is my favourite sport!It is a busy day．I am a little tired，but I am very happy．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①When my parents aren't at home，I can look after myself．當(dāng)我的父母不在家，我可以自己照顧自己．句子中when引導(dǎo)一個(gè)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，表示當(dāng)某某的時(shí)候，look after oneself照顧自己．
②Playing football is my favourite sport．踢足球是我最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)．句子中Playing football 放在句首做主語(yǔ)，應(yīng)該用動(dòng)名詞形式．

解答 When my parents aren't at home，I can look after myself（引出話題）（高分句型）．I get up at 6：00．ThenI wash my face and brush my teeth．I have my breakfast at about 6：30．I have noodles for breakfast．After breakfast  I clean my room．Then I do homework  afrom 7：50 to11：00，I watch Tv for about one hour．I have lunch at 12：00．After lunch，I sleep for one hour．About 2：00in the afternoon，I do homework again．At 4：00，I go to play football with my friends． Playing football is my favourite sport（高分句型）!It is a busy day（敘述我的一天）．I am a little tired，but I am very happy．（心里感受）

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