Question

書(shū)面表達(dá).15%.你是李明，七年級(jí)二班的一名學(xué)生，請(qǐng)你介紹你的學(xué)校生活(包括課內(nèi)和課外).80字左右.
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Answer 1

My name is Li Ming.I’m twelve years old. I’m a student in Class Two Grade Seven.My school life is so wonderful!Classes begin at 8:10 a.m.I have four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon.My favorite subject is math,because it ’s easy and interesting!And our teacher Miss Gao is friendly to us.I usually have lunch at school,then,I have a rest.After class,I aways play games with my friends.We play basketball, volleyball, football, ping-pong and so on. They are very relaxing.

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文，內(nèi)容涉及學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)和生活。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真審題，逐一羅列要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱。寫(xiě)作中注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文大多使用簡(jiǎn)單句，邏輯性強(qiáng)。學(xué)習(xí)中注意牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)適當(dāng)引用使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。