Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

請(qǐng)以How to Keep Healthy 為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

Answer 1

【答案】

How to Keep Healthy

Health is very important for everybody. Then how can we do to keep healthy? You can try the following tips:

First, you should have healthy eating habits. You should eat more vegetables and fruit. It’s good for you. Don’t eat too much meat. Don’t drink coffee too much.

Second, you can play sports. Sports can make you stronger and healthier. You can play basketball with your friends when you are free. You can go to the mountains with your family.

Third, be happy. A happy man lives longer than a sad man .So sing a song or watch a fun movie.You can do anything to make yourself happy.

At last, stay away from smoking and drinking. Smoking and drinking are too bad for men .They can cause terrible illness.

If you do these things, I believe you can be a healthy man.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們以How to keep healthy為題寫一篇作文。在題目中給了我們這篇短文的重點(diǎn)詞匯，如healthy habits 健康的習(xí)慣，eating habits飲食習(xí)慣，be good for對(duì)……有好處，do exercise進(jìn)行鍛煉， keep fit保持健康。我們要圍繞這些重點(diǎn)詞匯組織短文的寫作。其他很多內(nèi)容都需要我們自己去充實(shí)，讓它變得完整、合理，內(nèi)容豐富，這就需要花費(fèi)我們的想象力，以及我們平時(shí)積累的知識(shí)。另外，寫作時(shí)，還需注意語(yǔ)句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這是一篇比較不錯(cuò)的作文。作者從健康的習(xí)慣、鍛煉等幾個(gè)方面，告訴我們?nèi)绾尾拍鼙３纸】�，層次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己補(bǔ)充的內(nèi)容完成得也不錯(cuò)。如Health is very important for everybody. Then how can we do to keep healthy? 等。這些內(nèi)容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如If you do these things ,I believe you can be a healthy man. At last, stay away from smoking and drinking.等。