Question

【題目】 每個人都有愛好，你的愛好是什么？請以My hobby/hobbies.為題，寫一篇關于你愛好的文章，文章中你介紹你的愛好不超過兩個，寫出你為什么喜歡這項愛好，喜歡此愛好多長時間了，它給你帶來了什么好處。

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Answer 1

【答案】

My hobby

Different people have different hobbies .For example ,someone likes reading, someone likes swimming and someone likes collecting and so on. My hobby is listening to music. When I was a child I enjoyed listening to music .Now I often listen to music. When I am in trouble, music can make me happy. When I am very tired , it can make me comfortable . Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it's good for my health.

Do you like listening to music? If not, I hope you can have a try.

【解析】

試題分析：本文以聽音樂為自己的愛好，介紹了聽音樂的好處。文章能夠清楚地表述自己觀點和想法，寫作時應注意要用正確的格式去寫，會用一些短語，用一般現在時 以第一人稱來敘述。

寫作亮點：這篇短文涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點內容，表達準確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。同時使用了排比句，這為文章增色不少，如：someone likes reading, someone likes swimming and someone likes collecting and so on .When I am in trouble, music can make me happy. When I am very tired , it can make me comfortable。在學習中注意積累，背誦一些常用句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。