Question

根據(jù)漢語提示，完成短文，不少于80字。 要求：書寫工整，語句通順，有邏輯性。
上周六我們在李老師的幫助下一起乘火車去了首都北京，這是我們第一次去北京旅游的介紹。

Many places of interest	Tian’anmen Square Summer Palace Palace Museum The Great Wall
Activities	take photos eat delicious food buy some souvenir 4.  ---------------------
feelings	Learn a lot hope to visit again --------------

 
                                                                      　
                                                                        
                                                                        

Answer 1

Last Saturday, we went to the capital of China---Beijing, with the help of Mr Li. We  went there by train. It is the first time for us to be there, so we were very excited.
There are a lot of places of interest and we visited many wonderful places, such as Tian’anmen Square, Palace Museum, the Great Wall and so on. Then we walked around the big lake and felt the beauty of the old park in the Summer Palace. We took some photos and ate lots of tasty food.. We also bought some souvenirs for our friends.
We all had a good time and learned a lot from the trip. All of us hope to visit there again one day.

這不僅是一篇給材料作文而且給出了文中重點信息的英文，所以本篇作文難度并不大。只要選用合適的詞語把給出的句子連接好就能拿分。恰當?shù)氖褂枚陶Z會給文章增光添彩，如“在李老師的幫助下”表達為“with the help of mr li”，會增加得分點。長句的使用會讓文章更出彩，本文的activities就可以用and連接成表先后關系的長句。本篇是一篇簡單的記敘文，按照其先后順序把句子所缺的主謂賓補起來就ok了