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1．隨著年齡的增長(zhǎng)，我們的課外活動(dòng)領(lǐng)域會(huì)擴(kuò)大，關(guān)注點(diǎn)也會(huì)增多．你們學(xué)校的EnglishNewsletter 正在以My After-schoolActivites 為題舉行征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格提示的內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇征文．

	活動(dòng)	關(guān)注點(diǎn)
以前	1．看電視 2．…	自己
現(xiàn)在	1．和家長(zhǎng)交流 2．做志愿者 3．…	家庭，…
我們?cè)诔砷L(zhǎng)，我們應(yīng)該…

要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；
      2）必須包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
      3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（征文的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）
      4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等．
My After-School Activities
As we grow，both our after-school activities and what care about are becoming more and more．
In the past，Iused to watch TV or play computer games．Sometimes I play with my friends in the playground．We just think about ourselves．But nowadays we have changed a lot．We do a lot of volunteering work．For example，we often communicate with our parents and our relatives．We often do something meaningful for our communities and our neighborhood．And we begin to think about others，especially for our parents and ourfamilies．That's all．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
In the past I used to watch TV or play computer games．過(guò)去我常�？措娨暬蛲骐娔X游戲．
used to do sth指過(guò)去常常做某事．
高分句型二：
For example，we often communicate with our parents and our relatives．例如，我們經(jīng)常與我們的父母和親戚溝通．
communicate with sb指與某人交流，溝通．

解答 My After-school Activities
As we grow，both our after-school activities and what we care about are becoming more and more．In the past I used to watch TV or play computer games．【高分句型一】Sometimes I play with my friends in the playground．We just think about ourselves．【以前的課外活動(dòng)及關(guān)注點(diǎn)】But nowadays we have changed a lot．We do a lot of volunteering work．For example，we often communicate with our parents and our relatives．【高分句型二】We often do something meaningful for our communities and our neighborhood．And we begin to think about others，especially for our parents and our families．【現(xiàn)在的課外活動(dòng)及關(guān)注點(diǎn)】That's all．

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