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11．今年東臺正在申報全國文明城市，你們學(xué)校的English Club正在舉辦以"創(chuàng)建文明城市，爭做文明市民"為主題的征文活動，請你根據(jù)以下的內(nèi)容提示及要求寫一篇應(yīng)征稿．
內(nèi)容提示：◆尊敬師長，明禮誠信◆友善待人，樂于助人
◆遵守交規(guī)，不闖紅燈◆保護(hù)環(huán)境
◆你的觀點(diǎn)
寫作要求：
1．文章必須包含所提供的主要信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名；
3．詞數(shù)：90詞左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)）．
參考詞匯：respect （vt．尊敬），obey traffic rules遵守交規(guī)
Help to Make Dongtai a Civilized City
  We all know that Dongtai is applying for the national civilized city．As students，what should we do？We must respect our teachers，parents and the old．We shou ld also be polite and honest．Besides，we should help those who are in need and be friendly to the people around us．It is important for us obey traffic rules，too．When crossing the streets，we should walk on the zebra crossing．We mustn't go across the street when the traffic lights are red．What's more，we should protect the environment．For example，we mustn't step on the grass or pick flowers．We mustn't drop litter carelessly．．
Dongtai is our hometown．Let's try our best to make it a civilized city．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)勗鯓觿?chuàng)建文明城市，爭做文明市民．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1尊敬師長，明禮誠信
2友善待人，樂于助人
3遵守交規(guī)，不闖紅燈
4保護(hù)環(huán)境
5你的觀點(diǎn)
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
in need 處危急中
be friendly to 對某人友好
what's more 再者
drop litter 扔垃圾
【高分句型】
1．①Besides，we should help those②who are in need and ③be friendly to the people④around us．
①besides 另外
②who are in need定語從句，關(guān)系詞who做從句主語，修飾先行詞those．
③be friendly to 對某人友好
④介詞短語做后置定語，修飾people．
2．①It is important for us②obey traffic rules，too．
①it is+adj+for sb+to do sth對某人來說做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動詞不定式做真正主語．
②obey rules 遵守規(guī)則

解答 Help to Make Dongtai a Civilized City
  We all know that Dongtai is applying for the national civilized city．As students，what should we do？We must respect our teachers，parents and the old．We should also be polite and honest．（尊敬師長，明禮誠信）Besides，we should help those who are in need and be friendly to the people around us．【高分句型】（友善待人，樂于助人）It is important for us obey traffic rules，too．【高分句型】When crossing the streets，we should walk on the zebra crossing．We mustn't go across the street when the traffic lights are red．（遵守交規(guī)，不闖紅燈）What's more，we should protect the environment．（保護(hù)環(huán)境）．We mustn't step on the grass or pick flowers．We mustn't drop litter carelessly．（我的觀點(diǎn)）．
  Dongtai is our hometown．Let's try our best to make it a civilized city．

點(diǎn)評 本文是一篇給材料作文，短文的開頭已經(jīng)給出．寫作時先要圍繞這些要點(diǎn)組織材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容，注意將這些要點(diǎn)全部表達(dá)出來，并且要有適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，在談到自己的觀點(diǎn)時，要結(jié)合活動內(nèi)容，寫出自己的觀點(diǎn)．