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【題目】B．寫作題本學(xué)期，學(xué)生會(huì)活動(dòng)的主題是"人人為貧困孩子獻(xiàn)愛(ài)心"，請(qǐng)你以學(xué)生會(huì)主席的名義寫一份倡議書，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
1），許多孩子因貧困而上不起學(xué)
2），他們沒(méi)有足夠的學(xué)習(xí)用品和衣物
3），每個(gè)孩子都應(yīng)該有上學(xué)的權(quán)利（right）
4），盡快做些事去幫助他們很有必要，列舉具體幫助措施1……2……（至少兩點(diǎn)）
5），眾人拾柴火焰高。只要我們伸出援助之手，他們就會(huì)擁有獲得知識(shí)的機(jī)會(huì)。
注意：1），文章開(kāi)頭，結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)
2），作文應(yīng)包含所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮
3）, 100詞左右
Dear all,
In some parts of our country, many children are out of school.

Thanks a lot for your help.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear all,

In some parts of our country, many children are out of school. They are too poor to go to school. They don't have enough clothes and study materials. As a matter of fact, every child has his right to go to school. They should have a chace to study, which can help them learn a lot of knowledges. So, It's necessary for us to do something to give them a hand. For example, we can contribute some books, some study materials and some clothes as a gift for them. We can also endow some money so that they can buy something important for their study, such as desks and chairs. When everybody adds fuel, the flames rise high. As long as we lend a helping hand, they will have the chance to acquire knowledge.
Thanks a lot for your help.

【解析】這是一篇提綱作文，首先第一句可以用too...to...太......而導(dǎo)致不能......來(lái)寫；第二句中沒(méi)有足夠的可譯為“not enough”；第三句可以用主+謂+賓的形式來(lái)寫，主語(yǔ)為“every child”，謂語(yǔ)為“have”，賓語(yǔ)為“right to go to school”；第四句可以用“It's necessary to do something”句型來(lái)寫，然后自己可以具體列幾個(gè)例子來(lái)說(shuō)明，舉例子可用“For example”來(lái)寫，也可用“such as”或“for instance”來(lái)寫；第五句中應(yīng)用了諺語(yǔ)，這句諺語(yǔ)可以用“When everybody adds fuel, the flames rise high.”來(lái)表示；后面這句可以用if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句來(lái)寫。