Question

根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇70字左右的作文

1. 昨晚，Simon做了一個夢

2. 在夢中他追趕一只兔子來到一扇門前。

3. 兔子輕松穿過這道門，Simon個子太大無法進入

4. 他喝下門旁邊的一瓶水，瓶子上面有一個標簽“請喝我”。

5. 喝水之后，他變得越來越小。

6. 他穿過這道門進入一個美麗的花園，在那兒玩的很開心

                                                                                  

                                                                                  

                                                                                  

                                                                                  

                                                                                  

                                                                                  

                                                                                  

                                                                         

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Last night Simon had a dream. In his dream, he ran after the rabbit and came to a door. The rabbit walked through the door easily but Simon was too tall to go though it.

Then he saw a bottle of water near the door. He drank the bottle of water with notes “Drink me”. After he drank it, he became smaller and smaller . then he walked through the door and went into a beautiful garden.

There he had a good time.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，所給材料比較詳細，結合材料內(nèi)容，可知是寫一篇關于一個夢的記述文。由于是記述過去發(fā)生的事情，故主要用一般過去時態(tài)，人稱主要是單數(shù)第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題。記述文一般按照時間或者是清風發(fā)展的順序進行寫作，寫作中適當使用連詞，序數(shù)詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，、條理清楚，符合邏輯關系。

考點：提綱類作文

點評：做英語書面表達時，要注意認真審題，分析體裁，確定時態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤。日常學習中，注意多背誦范文，熟記一些經(jīng)典句型，考試時就能有所參照，有的放矢。