Question

請你根據(jù)以下的內(nèi)容，你（Millie）用英語寫一封邀請信，詞數(shù)80個左右。

⑴ 請你的朋友Daniel一起參加你們學校下周五的旅游。

⑵ 計劃一天的旅游：早上7：00在學校門口碰頭，乘兩個小時的長途汽車，到達世界公園，那里有來自全世界的一百多個名勝古跡 ……

⑶ 中午將乘船游玩，并在船上用餐

⑷ 大約在１７：００回來，會很累，但很開心

⑸ 你們一定會為每個人安排好愉快的一天，如果他來，請讓你盡快知道，你希望他能來參加

注意：短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，第2小點用2—3句作適當發(fā)揮。

Dear Daniel,

                                                                                       

                                                                                   

                                                                                  

Best wishes.

Millie

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Daniel,

  We will have our school trip to the World Park next Friday. We’ll meet at the school gate at 7:00 in the morning. The trip will take us two hours by coach. There are models of over one hundred places of interest from all over the world. We’ll visit the pyramids, the Golden Gate Bridge, the Eiffel Tower. You’ll not be able to believe your eyes when you see them. Because the model pyramids look just like the real ones in Egypt. They are small but wonderful. We’ll take a boat trip at noon and have lunch in the boat. We’ll come back at 17:00. We will be very tired but very happy. We’ll make a really fun day for everyone.

  If you want to come, please let me know as soon as possible. I hope you can join us.

  Best wishes,

   Millie

【解析】

 試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細，我們要用準確的語言把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般將來時態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，兼顧第二人稱；同時注意不可逐句翻譯要點，但短文中應該包含所有要點。寫作中要求習作者恰當使用連詞，和過渡句，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系；邀請別人參加語氣要委婉誠懇。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如: places of interest from all over the world來自全世界的名勝古跡the pyramids, the Golden Gate Bridge, the Eiffel Tower. 金字塔，金門大橋，埃菲爾鐵塔You’ll not be able to believe your eyes 你會難以相信自己的眼睛等表述準確，本文中連詞的使用恰當，語氣婉轉(zhuǎn)誠懇，很有說服力。

考點：話題作文。