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【題目】書面表達

假設聯(lián)合國教科文組織正在舉行“保護地球”英文征文活動，請以“Save the Earth!” 為題寫一篇詞數(shù)80左右的短文。內(nèi)容要點包括：

現(xiàn) 狀	1. 地球變臟、變暖；2. 自然災害多發(fā)；3. 動植物處于危險之中；
原 因	1. 人口越來越多；2. 砍伐森林、殺戮動物；3.……
建 議	1. 保護地球，從我做起；2. 不吃野生動物；3. 植樹造林；4.……

注意: 1. 短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，可適當發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2. 短文中不要出現(xiàn)具體的學校姓名和人名。

Save the earth

Our earth was healthy and beautiful in the past. However,___________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Save the earth

Our earth was healthy and beautiful in the past. However, now it’s getting dirtier and warmer. Natural disasters happen more often than before. Animals and plants are in danger.

Why does all this happen? First, there are more and more people on the earth. Second, people keep cutting down forests and killing animals for their fur or bones. Moreover,……

What can we do to protect the earth? I think everybody can do something to help save the earth. For example, we shouldn’t eat wild animals. We should plant more trees. What’s more, we should encourage people around us to do so.

I hope our earth will become more and more beautiful if we take action to protect it.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。應注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點、應用詞匯和語法結構的數(shù)量和準確性及上下文的連貫性。同時針對個人的真實情況與短文的要求進行恰當?shù)氖潞�，更能加強作品的可讀性。

寫作亮點：本文很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務。覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點；應用了較豐富的語法結構和詞匯；用詞準確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達清楚，沒有或基本沒有語言錯誤；書寫工整；字數(shù)符合要求。完全達到了預期的寫作目的。