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【題目】母愛情深，父愛無價(jià)，師恩無限，友情可貴。在生活中，有許多值得感恩的人，請(qǐng)以Love for ( ) 為題，寫一篇短文。
要求：1）請(qǐng)將題目補(bǔ)充完整。
2）用80-120詞寫一篇完整的短文。描述你所感恩的人；感恩的原因并列舉感恩的事例；你將為他/她做些什么來表達(dá)你的感激之情。
提示：1）開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
2）短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名及其他相關(guān)真實(shí)信息。
3）凡照抄本試卷里的文章段落，一律不得分。
Love for ( )
We need love, we also need to love others.

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version：

Love for my mother

We need love. We also need to love. The person who I love most is my mother. My mother is 38 years old. She is of medium build with long black hair. She is kind and friendly. She is a worker in a shop. She likes dancing. She can cook delicious food.

She did a lot for me when I was a child. She bought whatever I needed for my study even though she didn't have much money. She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons on the weekend. She cooked delicious and healthy food for me. Mom is the busiest person in my family but she is always happy to do everything for us. Mum, I love you!

When I grow up, I will do what I can to make my mother happy. I will find a good job after I graduate from college. I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young. I'll take her to wonderful sights around China. Most importantly, I will stay with her when I have free time. That's what she wants most, I think.

【解析】本題要求以Love for___ 為題目寫一篇作文，體會(huì)與親人等的愛，學(xué)會(huì)感恩，學(xué)會(huì)回報(bào)。寫作要點(diǎn)：短文中要對(duì)感恩對(duì)象進(jìn)行一個(gè)介紹，寫她為你做的事情，表達(dá)你對(duì)她的情感，把你要對(duì)她說的話告訴她。文中通過記敘她為你做的事情，把你對(duì)這些事情的感受，把你對(duì)她的感激之情表達(dá)出來。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)主要使用第三人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。如果舉例的話，用一般過去時(shí)。本文第一段首先點(diǎn)明主題：我最愛的人是我的母親，然后對(duì)母親作了一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單明了的介紹；第二段通過生活中的點(diǎn)點(diǎn)滴滴寫出媽媽為家人所做的一切，被愛的理由充分，符合題意要求，本段以I love you結(jié)尾，主旨鮮明。第三段寫如何感恩與回報(bào)。短文層次清晰，重點(diǎn)突出，表達(dá)流暢，語(yǔ)句連貫通順。