Question

我國(guó)在世界上屬于手機(jī)擁有量最大的國(guó)家。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn),談?wù)勈謾C(jī)給人們生活帶來(lái)
的利與弊。利:1. 方便,可隨時(shí)隨地與人聯(lián)系;2. 有許多功能,如發(fā)短信,聽音樂(lè),照相等。
弊:1. 有害于健康;2. 人們面對(duì)面交流的機(jī)會(huì)少了;3. 學(xué)生用手機(jī)會(huì)影響學(xué)習(xí)。
提示:1. 短文必須包括所有要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容;2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié);3. 詞數(shù):80 ~100 左右;
參考詞匯:聯(lián)系contact;功能function
It is reported that China owns the most cell phones in the world. ___________________________________________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

It is reported that China owns the most cell phones in the world. The cell phones play an important part in our daily life. By using it, we can contact people at any time and in any place.  Besides, they have many functions. We can send short messages , listen to music and take photos with the cell phones. But one coin has two sides. They
are bad for our health . As a result of using it, people have fewer chances to communicate with each other face to face. Especially for the students, who use them in class. It is really bad for them.

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