Question

19．假設(shè)你叫王磊．目前，我市正在開展創(chuàng)建"文明衛(wèi)生城市"，學(xué)校也提出了"垃圾不落地，校園更美麗"的口號(hào)，為了積極響應(yīng)學(xué)校號(hào)召，上周你和幾位同學(xué)到火車站進(jìn)行志愿者活動(dòng)，貢獻(xiàn)自己的一份力量．請(qǐng)把你所做的事寫一封電子郵件告訴你的好朋友Bob．

Place	Train station
Time	From 8：00 to 12：00 on Saturday morning
People	You and some classmates
Aclivitics	Clean the-benches．pick up the mbbish，sweep the ground
Feeling	A little tired but happy

要求：
1.80詞左右，文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2．文章盡可能包括表格中所有信息，語言流暢，書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔；
3．文中不得使用你的真實(shí)姓名及校名．
Bob，
I'm writing to tell you about a voluntary activity last week．
                                 
Wang Lei．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
My classmates and I decided to do something to make it cleaner and  tidier我的同學(xué)和我決定去做一些事情讓火車站更干凈整潔．
to make it cleaner and  tidier動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語．
【高分句型二】
I hope ①everyone will ②make a contribution to improving the environment of our city我希望每個(gè)人都能為改善城市的環(huán)境做貢獻(xiàn)．
①hope后是省略that的賓語從句．
②make a contribution to doing sth為…做貢獻(xiàn)

解答 Bob，
        I'm writing to tell you about a voluntary activity last week．We got to the train station at 8 o'clock on Saturday morning．My classmates and I decided to do something to make it cleaner and  tidier．【高分句型一】（地點(diǎn)時(shí)間人物）First，we cleaned the benches，and then we picked up the rubbish and advised others not to throw rubbish here and there．At noon，we swept the ground together and then we left．（活動(dòng)）We were a little tired after long hours of hard work，but we were still very happy．I hope everyone will make a contribution to improving the environment of our city．【高分句型二】（感受）
       Hope to write soon．Best wishes!
Yours，
Wang Lei

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