Question

【題目】書面表達

根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，寫一篇不少于60字的英語作文，介紹你在新學校的校園生活。

新學校	校園很大很美，有操場、花園、閱覽室等 從周一到周五上課，課堂有趣，學到很多 希望帶好朋友來新學校參觀
業(yè)余生活	熱愛運動和繪畫 是藝術俱樂部的成員
補充	還有很多有趣的事情 ……（適當發(fā)揮，補充一到兩點）

要求：1、字數(shù)不少于60字，文章開頭已給出，不計入總字數(shù)。不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名等信息。

2、文中須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮，使語句通順，意思連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Now I am a new student at Sunshine Middle School. I have a beautiful school.In my new school,it is very large.There is a playground,a garden and reading room.My teaching building has four floors.My classroom is on the third floor.It is big and clean.On the first floor is a library,and there are many books in it.But I do not often read books inside.My teachers are very good.Students are smart .We have classes from Monday to Friday.The classes are interesting and we learn a lot.I hope you will take some friends to visit my school.I enjoy sports and drawing.I am a member of the art club.I have other interesting things in my school.

I am very happy in my school.I like my school.

【解析】本文屬于材料作文，主要介紹新學校的校園生活。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容。

【亮點說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點詞句，如beautiful, large, big, clean, library, inside, smart, interesting, a lot, enjoy以及member等。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。