Question

14．個(gè)人的成長離不開他人的支持．請結(jié)合下面的提示詞，以"People Who Help Me"為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文．分別談?wù)劺蠋�、家人及朋友曾在哪些方面給予你關(guān)心和幫助，你將怎樣回報(bào)他們．
要求：1．條理清楚，書寫工整，句式規(guī)范，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號和大小寫使用正確．
=2．短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、地名．文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入單詞總數(shù)．
=3．提示詞語：care for，knowledge，encourage，support，difficulty，in the future，study harder（提示詞不必全部用上）．People Who Help me
During these years，I have got lots of help from my parents，teachers and friends．When I was crazy about playing computer games，my parents didn't blame me．They didn't give up helping me，but they still cared for my study and life．When I had difficulty in my study，my teachers taught me much knowledge patiently．When I couldn't get on well with others，my good friends gave me support and encourage．
In the future，I should never forget the help that they have given to me．At present，I should study harder in order to make our world more beautiful．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
①When I②was crazy about playing computer games，my parents didn't blame me．當(dāng)我癡迷于玩電腦游戲時(shí)，我的父母沒有責(zé)怪我．
①when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句
②be crazy about對…癡迷
高分句型二：
In the future，I should never forget the help that they have given to me．在未來，我永遠(yuǎn)不會忘記他們給我的幫助．
that引導(dǎo)的定語從句，修飾先行詞help，其在定語從句中充當(dāng)賓語．

解答 People Who Help me
During these years，I have got lots of help from my parents，teachers and friends．When I was crazy about playing computer games，my parents didn't blame me．【高分句型一】They didn't give up helping me，but they still cared for my study and life．When I had difficulty in my study，my teachers taught me much knowledge patiently．When I couldn't get on well with others，my good friends gave me support and encourage．【老師、家人及朋友曾在哪些方面給予我的關(guān)心和幫助】
In the future，I should never forget the help that they have given to me．【高分句型二】At present，I should study harder in order to make our world more beautiful．【我將怎樣回報(bào)他們】

點(diǎn)評 根據(jù)短文的內(nèi)容要求，確定先寫什么，后寫什么，按照表述內(nèi)容的情節(jié)發(fā)展和實(shí)際需要，重新排列組合已寫成的 句子，劃分必要的段落．但要注意句式的靈活運(yùn)用，長、短句，簡單句，復(fù)合句要搭配運(yùn)用．