【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)每個(gè)人都有自己的夢(mèng)想，都有自己的生活目標(biāo)，有的人想將來(lái)成為一名宇航員，有的人想將來(lái)成為一名老師為人民服務(wù)，他們都為了各自的夢(mèng)想而努力奮斗，那么你呢？你的夢(mèng)想是什么?你 又將如何來(lái)實(shí)現(xiàn)你的夢(mèng)想呢？請(qǐng)以“I’m going to be a\an…”為題寫(xiě)一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括以下幾個(gè)方面。

1. What are you going to be when you grow up?

2. Why are you going to be that?

3. How are you going to do?

4. Where are you going to work?

要求：1. 包含所給內(nèi)容，語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)意連貫，可是當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2. 字?jǐn)?shù)50字左右，開(kāi)頭一給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。

I want to be

【答案】

I want to be a reporter when I grow up. I think it’s an interesting job. I am going to send articles to magazines. And after I finish high school, I want to go to a work in a university in Beijing. I want to work in a TV station and travel all over the world one day. So I’m going to study harder.

What’s your dream? How are you going to do that? Can you tell me?

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)所給信息，來(lái)介紹一下自己夢(mèng)想。題目中以問(wèn)句的方式給出了提示。這些信息包括你的理想是成為什么樣的人；為什么；你如何實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想等。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，我們可以根據(jù)需要將這些信息進(jìn)行重新整理和安排，使文章的意思銜接更自然。所用詞匯和句型，應(yīng)是學(xué)生們比較熟悉的，所以將平時(shí)的積累發(fā)揮出來(lái)就可以。當(dāng)然我們要盡量使用一些好的句型和連詞，使文章上下文意思連貫，更出彩。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這是一篇非常優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者按照題目的要求，給我們介紹了自己的夢(mèng)想，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，要點(diǎn)全面。而且作者在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，并不是完全按照題目中給出的順序，逐句翻譯的，而是將這些信息進(jìn)行了整合，讓意思關(guān)聯(lián)緊密的放在一起表達(dá)，這一點(diǎn)很好。短文中的語(yǔ)言合乎英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)規(guī)范，而且作者還使用了一些較好的句式，增強(qiáng)了文章的連貫性。如動(dòng)詞不定式I want to be a reporter when I grow up.、介詞短語(yǔ)I want to go to a work in a university in Beijing、連詞So I’m going to study harder.等。

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