Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你是王昆.你的美國(guó)網(wǎng)友Tom對(duì)中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日‘.春節(jié)”非常感興趣，請(qǐng)你以“My Favorite Festival”為題.寫一封E-mail.,給他做一介紹。

1.要點(diǎn)包括:節(jié)日簡(jiǎn)介、節(jié)日準(zhǔn)備、節(jié)日活動(dòng)等;

2.字?jǐn)?shù)要求:10。字左右。

3.提示:the Spring Festival, traditional, get together, clean up, be dressed in...

△Subject: My Favorite Festival

From: Wang Kun

Dear Tom,

Wang Kun

Answer 1

【答案】

DearTom.

The Spring Festival is the most important traditional festival to Chinese people.

Several days before the new year, people begin to prepare for it. My parents buy meat, fish and vegetables. Houses are cleaned up.

On the eve of the new year, the whole family get together and have a big dinner. After the meal we watch “the Spring Evening” on TV until twelve o’clock. On the first day of the new year, each of us is dressed in new clothes. When meeting others outside, we say “Happy New Year” to each other. We pay new years calls to friends and relatives. That day my parents and relatives give “Red Bags（money）to us children. All of us have a great time.

Wang Kun

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，描述中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日春節(jié)。本題沒有給出具體材料, 只給出了幾個(gè)問題，需要自己先確定寫作內(nèi)容,然后在動(dòng)筆寫作.選取材料時(shí),注意選擇自己熟悉的內(nèi)容.在寫作時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語(yǔ)言的規(guī)范性。結(jié)合材料可知本文主要是一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文行文流暢，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范。還使用了一些固定句型及短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如prepare for，the whole family get together and have a big dinner等等。