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根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示和要求，以“My Dream Job”為題寫(xiě)一篇短文．

內(nèi)容提示：1．想成為一名記者；

2．多讀書(shū)，勤寫(xiě)作，向報(bào)刊、雜志投稿……；

3．高中畢業(yè)后去北京上大學(xué)；

4．想到電視臺(tái)工作，游祖國(guó)大好河山，觀世界風(fēng)云變幻；

5．通過(guò)努力，夢(mèng)想成真．

要求：1．條理清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；

2．可根據(jù)提示適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容；

3．不少于80詞．

答案：
解析：

One possible version：

　　I like talking to people and asking them questions, so I want to be a journalist(reporter)when I grow up．The job is interesting but kind of dangerous．Now I'm going to do some more reading and writing and write articles for newspapers and magazines．I'm going to a university in Beijing after senior(high)school．Next I'm going to work for a TV station as a journalist(reporter)．Then I'm going to travel throughout China and all over the world．I think my dream will come true someday if I work hard．

　　評(píng)分說(shuō)明：

　　1．選擇題部分凡與答案不符的，不給分．

　　2．填空題部分只要意思正確，語(yǔ)言通順，符合答題要求，符合英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣的，均可以給分．

　　3．單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤不給分，大小寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤每1－2處扣0.5分，每3－4處扣1分，本小題本句話分?jǐn)?shù)扣完為止．

　　4．書(shū)面表達(dá)題評(píng)分檔次：

　�、俚谝粰n(9－10分)

　　信息完整，表達(dá)流暢，無(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤或基本無(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤．

　�、诘诙䴔n(7－8分)

　　信息基本完整，表達(dá)較流暢，有少量錯(cuò)誤，但不影響意思表達(dá)．

　�、鄣谌龣n(5－6分)

　　能傳遞部分信息，表達(dá)不夠流暢，語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤較多，但句子基本可讀．

　　④第四檔(3－4分)

　　只能傳遞少量信息，表達(dá)不通順，語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤多，只有少量句子可讀．

　　⑤第五檔(1－2分)

　　只能傳遞個(gè)別信息，表達(dá)不清楚，只有個(gè)別句子可讀．


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