Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你叫李華，現(xiàn)在的你和以前已經(jīng)改變了許多。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格提示寫一篇短文，介紹一下你的不同之處。詞數(shù)100-120個(gè)左右。

	In the past	Now
Appearance	short, fat, short hair	tall, thin, long hair
Personality	shy/ silent,	outgoing/ active
Study	ask the teacher for help	study with a group
Favorite festival	The Mid- Autumn Festival …	The Spring Festival …
hobbies	like…/ hate …	like…/ hate…

How I’ve changed!

People sure changed, I have changed a lot in the last few years.

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

How I’ve changed

My life has changed a lot in the last few years. I used to be very short, fat but now I’m much taller and thinner than before. Now I have long hair, but I used to have short hair. I was shy and silent, but now I much more outgoing and active.

I liked the Mid- Autumn Festival best in the past, but now my favorite festival is the Spring Festival. Another change is that now I study with a group. However, I used to ask the teacher for help when I had some difficulty in studying. The biggest change in my life was my hobby. I used to watch cartoon on TV, now I like soap opera. I didn’t use to like English class, even hate it. But now it’s my favorite class. I used to play with my friend after school every day. Now I have no time, I just study all the time.

All in all, I’m happy with these changes, because they have brought me the happiness of growth.

【解析】

試題分析：

這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我發(fā)生的變化。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如： I used to...；but now my favorite festival is ...；But now it’s ...及 I’m happy with ...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要表達(dá)自己的交友意愿。。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我最近有一些變化，接下來介紹我的外貌、性格、學(xué)習(xí)和愛好的變化，最后對(duì)自己的變化感到高興。此處ask sb for sth, have difficulty in doing sth, play with , all the time等這些詞組以及連詞but, and 和however的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。