Question

情景作文（1個大題；滿分10分）
根據(jù)提示和要求，寫一篇短文。將短文寫在答題卡情景作文空白處。
假設你的名字是李華,給你新認識的朋友Jim 發(fā)個E-mail ,介紹你自己的基本情況（年齡，學習的學校．班級，愛好，家庭情況等,至少寫出5個完整的句子）E-mail的開頭與結尾已給出。
Dear Jim ，
I would like to tell you something about myself.
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
Yours，
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Jim ，
I would like to tell you something about myself. I am a student. I am thirteen years old . I am in Class One , Grade One in  No. 2  Middle School in Yongzhou.  I like English very much . I think you can help me with my English .  There are four people in my family . My father is an office worker and my mother is a Chinese teacher . My sister is a student, too. She is in Grade Two. I have a happy family .  Let’s  be good friends and help each other .
Please write soon.
All the best !
Yours，
Li Hua

試題分析: 這是一篇應用文寫作，寫一封電子郵件，介紹自己的基本情況。本題只給出了寫作要點，動筆前要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，確定時態(tài)、句式、關鍵單詞等問題。然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。
點評：注意寫作中的時態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問題，時態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫作中語言要準確、簡明，說明有條理，符合邏輯。