Question

【題目】請根據(jù)下表提示介紹Tom過去和現(xiàn)在的情況,并就此事談談你的看法及對他的建議。

過去	喜歡看書,功課好,花很多時間學習和鍛煉。
現(xiàn)在	因沉溺于用手機發(fā)信息和玩電腦游戲導致對學習沒興趣,上課時不專心聽課
你的看法	玩手機可以使人放松,但…
你的建議	至少兩點

要求:1.80-100詞:短文必須包括表格中的信息,條理清晰,觀點明確,意思連貫。

2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校的名稱及其他相關信息。

Answer 1

【答案】例文

Tom has changed a lot in the last few years.

He used to like reading books and do well in his lessons. He also spent much time studying and doing exercises at school. But now he is so crazy about sending messages and playing computer games by using mobile phones that he has no interest in his school work and doesn’t listen to teachers as carefully as before in class. Perhaps playing with mobile phones can make him relaxed, but if he spends too much time on it, he will have less time to study. He should pay more attention to his school work. Why not take part in some after-school activities when he feels bored? Why not spend more free time chatting face-to-face with his friends?

【解析】

1. 題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作。在寫作時應注意要包括提示的四個內容：第一部分Tom的過去；第二部分Tom的現(xiàn)在；第三部分你的看法；第四部分你對Tom的建議。