Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)：

Hey Li Hua! How are you doing? I’ve been busy since I came back from China. Guess what! I’m learning Chinese very hard, but I find it really difficult to learn Chinese well. Please tell me the best way you think. One more thing, I hear you have Mid-Autumn Festival in China. What’s the date of the festival? How do you celebrate? Tony

請(qǐng)閱讀Tony從美國(guó)發(fā)來(lái)的電子郵件，并根據(jù)所給提示和要求，以李華的名義回復(fù)。

提示：（1）告訴 Tony 一種你認(rèn)為是最好的學(xué)中文的方法。

（2）回答 Tony 有關(guān)中秋節(jié)的問(wèn)題。

要求：（1）郵件必須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

（2）郵件中不得涉及真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名。開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

（3）詞數(shù)：80詞左右。

參考詞匯： learn Chinese, the best way, the lunar calendar(陰歷), mooncakes, enjoy the moon. The symbol of reunion(團(tuán)圓的象征)

Hi, Tony,

Good to hear from you! I’m glad that you’re learning __________________________________

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Bye for now,

Answer 1

【答案】

Hi, Tony,

Good to hear from you! It’s amazing that you’re learning Chinese cooking. Why are you interested in it? How are you learning? And what can you cook? Hope to enjoy your dishes next time!

Yes, we really have Mid-Autumn Festival. It’s on August 15th of the lunar calendar. It’s one of the most important festivals in China. All the family members get together for a big dinner that day. We usually eat moon cakes while watching the moon at night. We believe the full moon is the symbol of reunion.

Bye for now,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們對(duì)Tony發(fā)來(lái)的電子郵件進(jìn)行回復(fù)，因此首先我們要知道Tony在電子郵件中都說(shuō)了些什么。通過(guò)閱讀這封電子郵件可知，這里面Tony一共說(shuō)到了兩件事，一是告訴李華他在學(xué)習(xí)做中國(guó)菜；二是Tony想向李華了解中國(guó)的中秋節(jié)的情況。因此我們的回復(fù)中也應(yīng)該包括兩個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容：一是對(duì)Tony學(xué)習(xí)做中國(guó)菜有一個(gè)回應(yīng)；二是向他介紹中國(guó)的中秋節(jié)。這些內(nèi)容我們要用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)，里面有一些需要用到的詞匯，如農(nóng)歷lunar calendar，這個(gè)短語(yǔ)可能使一些學(xué)生感到困難。通過(guò)分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)該主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)我們還需要注意表達(dá)的流暢，意思連貫。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。在這篇短文里面，作者按照題目的要求對(duì)Tony的電子郵件進(jìn)行了回復(fù)。首先作者對(duì)他在學(xué)習(xí)做中國(guó)菜表示很驚訝，使用了兩個(gè)問(wèn)句，還說(shuō)要親自品嘗他做的菜，Hope to enjoy your dishes next time!。這幾句話的表達(dá)都非常貼切，符合這里的情景；接下來(lái)作者向Tony介紹了中國(guó)的中秋節(jié)，它的時(shí)間，以及中秋節(jié)的一些傳統(tǒng)的習(xí)俗。文章的內(nèi)容完整，表達(dá)的意思也很準(zhǔn)確。短文中使用的比較好的句型有，It’s one of the most important festivals in China.、All the family members get together for a big dinner that day、We usually eat moon cakes while watching the moon at night.、We believe the full moon is the symbol of reunion.等。