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【題目】北京仁愛國(guó)際英語學(xué)校八年級(jí)學(xué)生魏軍向福州的網(wǎng)友李志發(fā)了一封電子郵件，詢問了一些情況。請(qǐng)根據(jù)來信幫他回一封電子郵件。

注意：1.詞數(shù)：60詞左右；

2.郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已替你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Receiver：	Li Zhi@163.com
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Subject：	How to protect the clean water?
Dear Li Zhi， I feel very excited about my visit to Fuzhou and meeting you for the first time! But I’m still not sure about the following questions： 1. Are there any rivers or lakes in your city? 2. Is the water dirty or clean? Why? 3. Did you do anything useful to protect the clean water? Please let me know. Your friend， Wei Jun

Dear Wei Jun，

I am very excited to receive your e-mail. I am interested in your questions.

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Looking forward to meeting you soon.

Yours，

Li Zhi

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Wei Jun,

I am very excited to receive your e-mail. I am interested in your questions.

There are many rivers in our city. Ming Jiang River is one of the longest rivers. But the water in the river isn’t as clean as before. This is because people cut the trees down a lot. As we know, trees can keep the water much cleaner. On March 12th, we often plant some trees on the hills. More and more trees are growing. I think the water is becoming cleaner and cleaner.

Looking forward to meeting you soon.

Yours,

Li Zhi

【解析】

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