Question

【題目】你正在組織一項(xiàng)暑假期間到山區(qū)為期一周的游學(xué)和幫扶活動(dòng)。作為發(fā)起人，請(qǐng)你寫一篇發(fā)言稿，在你校“英語(yǔ)時(shí)光”廣播中號(hào)召更多的同學(xué)參加。

要求：

1. 80—100詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。

參考信息：

1. 活動(dòng)緣由（孤獨(dú)、幫扶、游學(xué)……）

2. 活動(dòng)構(gòu)想（時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容……）

3. ……

Hello, everybody. I am planning a summer trip called “Be a Kid in the Mountain”. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thank you!

Answer 1

【答案】Hello, everybody. I am planning a summer trip called “Be a kid in the Mountains”. It will provide us with a meaningful week staying with the students in the mountains.

As many of their parents leave for the city to work, those students might feel lonely and some may even find it hard to go on studying. So we can bring them some school things like books and pens for their study, and prepare some interesting stories to share. In the daytime, we can go hiking and do some teamwork. In the evening, we can do such activities as popular games and group dance around the fire.

Isn’t that exciting? Come and join us. Let’s be “a kid in the mountains”. I believe it will bring sunshine to the children in the mountains as well as more confidence to us.

Thank you!

【解析】

這是一篇發(fā)言稿，也就是材料作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下在暑假期間到山區(qū)為期一周的游學(xué)和幫扶活動(dòng)的情況。目的是：號(hào)召更多的同學(xué)參加。主要從活動(dòng)緣由（孤獨(dú)、幫扶、游學(xué)……）；活動(dòng)構(gòu)想（時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容……）和其他方面來介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。

【高分句型一】

As many of their parents leave for the city to work, those students might feel lonely and some may even find it hard to go on studying. 由于很多父母都去城市工作，這些學(xué)生可能會(huì)感到孤獨(dú)，有些人甚至覺得很難繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)。it hard to go on studying.中的it是形式賓語(yǔ)。

【高分句型二】

I believe it will bring sunshine to the children in the mountains as well as more confidence to us. 我相信它會(huì)給山里的孩子們帶來陽(yáng)光，也會(huì)給我們帶來更多的信心。句子it will bring sunshine to the children in the mountains as well as more confidence to us.是賓語(yǔ)從句。做believe的賓語(yǔ)。