Question

17．Write at least 50words about"My dream"．Use the suggested questions below．（結(jié)合你的實(shí)際，根據(jù)問題提示并圍繞問題提示，以"我的夢(mèng)想"為題，寫至少五十個(gè)詞短文，要求意思明確，內(nèi)容連貫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格．）
Use the following points as a reference．
☆Do you have any dream？
☆What do you want to be when you grow up？
☆What should you do to realize（實(shí)現(xiàn)） your dream？
（考生注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分）：
My dream．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
Someone wants to be a basketball player because they are good at sport．有人想成為一個(gè)籃球運(yùn)動(dòng)員，因?yàn)樗麄兩瞄L(zhǎng)運(yùn)動(dòng)．這是一個(gè)原因狀語(yǔ)從句．主句主語(yǔ)someone某人，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)．want to be想要成為什么．be good at擅長(zhǎng)．they他們，因此用be動(dòng)詞復(fù)數(shù)are．
句型二：
I must practise harder and harder in order to come true my dream．為了實(shí)現(xiàn)我的夢(mèng)想，我必須更加努力地練習(xí)．主語(yǔ)I，must情態(tài)動(dòng)詞后用動(dòng)詞原形practise．harder and harder越來(lái)越努力．in order to為了…come true實(shí)現(xiàn)．

解答 What do I want to do when I grow up？Someone wants to be a doctor．Someone wants to be a basketball player because they are good at sport．【高分句型一】（其他人的夢(mèng)想）I like playing the piano and I am good at it．So I want to become a piano player．（我的夢(mèng)想） Play the piano is very interesting．And you can learn something of music．Piano can make you like music．A lot of musician and singer are love playing piano．（原因）
I play the piano when I'm ten years old．I must practise harder and harder in order to come true my dream．【高分句型二】（如何實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想）
Becoming a piano play is a hard job．But I believe I can do it．（鼓勵(lì)自己）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫作時(shí)要明確要點(diǎn)，做到思路清晰，句式靈活，表達(dá)流暢，語(yǔ)法正確，結(jié)合要求，注意作文題材，不要寫跑題．日常積累一些短語(yǔ)和詞句．