Question

【題目】書面表達(dá) （20分）

根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，寫一篇英語短文。80詞左右

Name	Problems	Should	Shouldn’t
Alice	tired	go to bed early	go to the party tonight
Alan	cut his knee	put a bandage	play soccer
Gina	have a nosebleed	put her head down	jump up and down
Tony	hurt his leg playing basketball	get an X—ray	walk to the hospital
Julie	have a toothache	brush her teeth every day	eat candy before sleep

Alice is tired. She should go to bed early, and she shouldn’t go to the party tonight.

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Alice is tired. She should go to bed early, and she shouldn’t go to the party tonight. Alan cut his knee. He should put a bandage and he shouldn’t play soccer. Gina has a nosebleed. She should put her head down, and she shouldn’t jump up and down. Tony hurts his leg playing basketball. He should get an X-ray, and he shouldn’t walk to the hospital. Julie has a toothache. She should brush her teeth every day, and she shouldn’t eat candy before sleep.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹五個(gè)人的不同身體問題以及他們應(yīng)該做的事和不應(yīng)該做的事。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)。注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：She should ...., he shouldn’t...., Julie has...以及she shouldn’t......等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要完整地表達(dá)出表格中所列的內(nèi)容。

【寫作亮點(diǎn)】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。本文依次介紹了Alice, Alan, Gina, Tony和Julie的身體問題，并對(duì)他們的問題給出的建議，他們應(yīng)該做的和不應(yīng)該做的。此處go to bed, jump up and down,get an X-ray, brush her teeth 等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。