Question

2．現(xiàn)在很多學生不能好好管理時間，以致影響了學習，請你就此寫一篇短文，談談你的看法．
內(nèi)容包括：
1．你或你的同學一次未能按時完成學習任務的經(jīng)歷，任務內(nèi)容拖延的原因及后果．
2．對如何管理好時間提出兩點建議．
作文要求：
1．不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學校真實的名稱和學生的真實姓名．
2．語句連貫詞數(shù)80個左右，作文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)，也不必抄寫在答題卡上了．
Nowadays，many students can't make good use of their time and this has a bad influence on their study．
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I thought there was no need to finish my homework in a hurry．
"there was no need to finish my homework in a hurry．"在句中為賓語從句．"in a hurry"意為：匆忙，慌忙．其中此句還涉及到一個句型"there is no need to do sth 沒必要做某事．"這句話意為：我認為沒有必要急著完成作業(yè)．
高分句型二：
I spent most of my time playing games and going to travel．
這句話涉及到了spend的用法：sb spend+時間/金錢+（in） doing sth 某人花費時間/金錢做某事．這句話意為：我把大部分的時間都用在了打游戲和旅游上．

解答 Nowadays，many students can't make good use of their time and this has a bad influence on their study．
For example，we had a two-month holiday this summer．Our teachers asked us to do some homework during the holiday．I thought there was no need to finish my homework in a hurry．【高分句型一】I spent most of my time playing games and going to travel．【高分句型二】Finally，I found I had forgotten to do my homework．But there wasn't enough time for me．（經(jīng)歷）When I went to school，my teacher was angry with me．（后果）
    Now，I realise that we should learn to manage the time．On the one hand，we should know the importance of valuing the time．There is a saying："Time is money．"But I think time is more important than money．On the other hand，we can make a plan and try to follow it．（建議）

點評 考生在寫作時要明確寫作要點，注意時態(tài)的運用．寫作中要做到思路清晰，表達流暢．